Page turners by Violet Carr Moore

Violet Carr Moore

Violet Carr Moore

The initial reviewer of the first chapters of my most recent mystery novel asked “Where’s the conflict?” The next critiquer said “Lacks tension.” The third reader followed with “Needs more action.” Number four summed it up with “Nothing worth turning the page in these chapters.”

Nothing. Worth. Turning. The. Page.

The manuscript took shape as my fifth NaNoWriMo challenge last November. My main focus was the gallop to the finish line before Thanksgiving dinner. Four months later the novel smelled worse than unrefrigerated limburger on a summer day. Only the title, Retribution, offered action, conflict and tension.

I tried to revise the first chapters, but it was like rerolling a pie crust. The more I worked, the tougher it became. After a face-to-face meeting with a couple of the reviewers, I choose to lay it aside and concentrate on my second NaNo novel. It started with tension and conflict on the first page. The characters pushed forward to form a strong plot and subplots. An arc and a justice-prevails conclusion followed.

A page turner.

 

Make a Scene: Crafting a Powerful Story One Scene at a Time

Jordan Rosenfeld

Jordan Rosenfeld

Jordan E. Rosenfeld will be the guest speaker at our next monthly meeting on Saturday, June  15, 2013, at the Four Points by Sheraton, 5115 Hopyard, Pleasanton.

Jordan E. Rosenfeld, author of the popular writing guide Make a Scene and the debut novel Forged in Grace, will teach you how to activate your writing, creating the page-turning energy of blockbuster fiction by mastering the essential building block: the scene. You’ll learn how to “demonstrate” not “lecture,” crafting compelling, textured, memorable scenes. You’ll never write the same way again.

Ms. Rosenfeld’s essays and articles have appeared in such publications as AlterNet.org, Publisher’s Weekly, The San Francisco Chronicle, The St. Petersburg Times, The Writer and Writer’s Digest magazine. Her book commentaries have appeared on The California Report, a news-magazine produced by NPR-affiliate KQED radio. She lives in Northern California with her Batman-obsessed son and Psychologist husband. Find out more at www.jordanrosenfeld.net

Hector Timourian wins Lydia Wood first place poetry award

Hector Timourian

Hector Timourian

Hector Timourian received the Lydia Wood first place poetry award for “Abraham’s Hope” published in All That Remains, the Las Positas College 2013 anthology.  This award, the highest honor for poetry, was announced at the anthology publication ceremony on May 11, 2013.

Eight Tri-Valley members published in Las Positas Anthology 2013

Eight members of Tri-Valley Writers were published in All That Remains, the Las Positas College 2013 anthology.  A  publication ceremony celebrated these and other authors on May 11, 2013, where they each received a complimentary book. 

Poetry

Hector Timourian: “Abraham’s Hope” – First Prize Winner 

Deborah Jordan Bernal: “Get Off the Road” and “Dreams”

Susan Condeff: “Pen Over Paper”

Alice Kight: “Summer” and “John Denver’s Voice”

Marilyn Slade: “Freedom”

Prose

Stacey Gustafson: “Hair Today Gone Tomorrow” and “He’s Not That Into Me”

Julaina Kleist-Corwin: “Stepping Stones”

Mary Ann Shaffer: “The Medic”

Alice Kight poems published

Alice Kight

“To The Dandelion,” a poem by Alice Kight, was published in the Spring 2013 issue of Song of the San Joaquin.

Alice Kight received Honorable Mention for her poem “Away” in the March contest for the California Federation of Chaparral Poets

Catherine Accardi book-of-the-year for Fathers Day

San Francisco Landmarks

 

San Francisco North Beach and Telegraph Hill

San Francisco North Beach and Telegraph Hill

Catherine Accardi’s two most recent books, Images of America-San Francisco Landmarks, and San Francisco’s North Beach and Telegraph Hill have been the basis for her many presentations in San Francisco. Those include one at Ghirardelli Square’s historic 1916 Workman’s Building for the Victorian Alliance and upcoming presentation for the San Francisco History Association later this year. Costco’s San Francisco store has chosen her landmarks book as their “book of the year” to be highlighted at a book event on June 15th in honor of Fathers Day.

Arleen Eagling published in Thema

Arleen Eagling

Arleen Eagling

Arleen Eagling’s short story “Half a Good Chance,” has been accepted for publication by the Thema Literary Society. It will appear in  A Week and a Day summer 2013 issue.  

Shelley Riley featured at Towne Center Books

Shelley Riley PhotoShelley Riley, author of Casual Lies – A Triple Crown Adventure, was featured by Towne Center Books on May 3, 2013  for a celebration of the 139th running of the Kentucky Derby. Friends and fans donned their Kentucky Derby finery and drank a Mint Julep while Shelley took them behind the scenes at the Kentucky Derby. Shelley also chronicled her racing career from her new memoir at the Alameda County Fairgrounds on May 4th. Find our more about Shelley at www.shelleyriley.com.

When a stranger called me a writer by Lani Longshore

Lani Longshore

Lani Longshore

I spent the last week in April at the Studio Art Quilt Associates (SAQA) conference in Santa Fe. During one of the evening meet-and-greets, I was introduced to the woman in charge of blogs for the Northern California region. I mentioned my quilting sci-fi novels, and offered to write a blog about my experience as a new member at my first SAQA conference. She agreed, so I asked about editorial guidelines.

“Oh, I’m not concerned about that,” she said. “You’re the professional writer.”

I was surrounded by women making a living as artists, and she called me the professional. I was stunned and almost protested. Then I realized, yes, I should call myself a professional writer.

Even before joining CWC, I took classes and read books on the art of writing. Since then, I’ve had more opportunities to take workshops, submit stories to contests, and work with editors and critique groups. I have honed my craft and become a better writer. Still, the step between training to be a writer and acknowledging myself as a writer is daunting. For as much as family and friends have encouraged, supported and affirmed my goals, I realized that I had not made that step until someone else—a stranger—said the words.

I’m constantly advised to grasp every opportunity to promote myself and my writing. I can testify that the advice is sound. Not only do I have a chance to let a whole new group of potential readers know about me and my books, I received an affirmation I had not realized I wanted or needed. 

May 2013 President’s Message by Paula Chinick

Paula Chinick

Paula Chinick

 

There is an old saying that you get back more than what you give. It has been true for me. As a volunteer for the Tri-Valley Writers and other nonprofit organizations in the area, I have had opportunities to meet people I would never have encountered otherwise. Many of these people have become lifelong friends. As a Tri-Valley volunteer, you are given an opportunity to work alongside other members and learn more about the club. I encourage you to volunteer and learn new skills that can make you feel good about yourself. It also looks good on your bio.