The spelling bee by Violet Carr Moore

Violet Carr Moore

Violet Carr Moore

I was a timid grammar school student-the proper term back then. I didn’t raise my hand in class. I hated standing up front, the object of everyone’s attention. My shyness persisted to upper elementary. In the eighth grade, teachers recognized my expanded vocabulary and A+ spelling abilities and encouraged me-pushed is a more definitive word-to participate in the school spelling bee.

My knees knocked together louder than my soft words, incomprehensible beyond the edge of the four-foot tall stage. My confidence climbed as other students dropped one by one, felled by misspelled words. At last, a single boy stood next to me. Students leaned forward on their chairs and teachers stared from the side aisles of the auditorium as the final word was given. The complex word rolled through my mind like an Agate marble or a steelie ready for the strike. I hesitated, then pronounced each letter in a hushed tone. “Incorrect,” the moderator said.

Chagrined, I turned toward my classmate. A smile replaced his worried frown. With a voice so crisp it sounded like the crunch of fall leaves on the sidewalk outside, he repeated my spelling, transposing two of the letters. He later admitted had he been first, he would have had no idea how to spell the word.

For years, I consulted a dictionary for backup when a word looked strange on the printed page. Now, when the moderator, Ms. Spellchecker, questions my spelling of “steelie” with a red underline, I go online to prove that I’m the hands-down winner in this spelling contest.

Dissecting a stinking manuscript by Violet Carr Moore

Violet Carr Moore

Violet Carr Moore

I’m writing another mystery novel. Not because my first manuscript has been scooped up by a publisher, but because I listened to professionals and laid aside the first novel to work on something new. Advice from those same pros pound in my ears. “Grab the reader with the first lines, keep the plot moving, build scenes to crescendo to an arc, and tie up all the loose ends before the last page.”

I write without an outline-flying by the seat of my pants. Or, a more accurate description would be the tips of my fingers. My first drafts are rough as hand-hewn trees felled for a log cabin. With full awareness that my draft isn’t ready, I sidestep that knowledge and offer it for review. My readers accept the project like dissecting a stinking frog for science class, or examining a cadaver in medical training. They probe and poke. Now and then, they smile and nod an affirmative.

Meet my critique group. Six dedicated CWC Tri-Valley writers with diverse talents who review selected chapters of my draft manuscripts each month. An eclectic novelist group, writers from fantasy to mystery with historical fiction and women’s rights sandwiched between, diversity binds us together. They applaud my writing strengths and assess my flaws. They ask questions that let me reshape my fictional characters into believable people. They dissect my stinking manuscript and make it come out smelling like a rose.

June 2012 President’s Message from Violet Carr Moore

Time to say goodbye as my second presidential term ends. Perhaps, so long is a more appropriate signoff because I’m following the steps of other past presidents, accepting a new volunteer role. See you around.

 

May 2012 President’s Message from Violet Carr Moore

Spring is a palette of color. It dispels winter with fresh sights, sounds and aromas to be savored. It brings new ideas for art, poetry and prose. Congratulations to Tri-Valley members who polished your work until it shined in the Las Positas College Anthology.

-Violet Carr Moore

April 2012 President’s Message from Violet Carr Moore

Dear Poets, You have brought us to tears and mended broken hearts. You have taken us to faraway places and brought us home again. We salute you in April, National Poetry Month.

~Violet Carr Moore

March 2012 President’s Message from Violet Carr Moore

March is resplendent with green. From dewy reflections of fresh blades of grass to leaping leprechauns and shamrocks, spring warms the winter chill. A caravan of sentences becomes poetry. Pen strokes or clicks of computer keys embody a novel. These gems of new life bloom at Tri-Valley Writers.

Violet Carr Moore

February 2012 President’s Message from Violet Carr Moore

Punxsutawney Phil predicted six more weeks of winter. Even that chilly declaration can’t cast a shadow on writers. Attend a conference. Enroll in a class. Join a critique group. Mentor a new writer. Stir up the gift of creativity within you while you wait.

Violet Carr Moore

January 2012 President’s Message from Violet Carr Moore

2012.I will blog. Join a critique group. Attend a conference. Revise my mystery manuscript. Journal. Submit. And?celebrate. I’ll toast blog comments with tea and chocolate. I’ll savor critiques from my novelist group (more chocolate). Along the way, I’ll celebrate your successes with?you guessed it?more chocolate. Happy New Year!

Violet Carr Moore

Tri-Valley Writers in Tapestries

Julaina Kleist, CWC Tri-Valley member, was selected by the Downtown Oakland Senior Center to emcee at the December 9th anthology launch. In addition to Julaina, Tri-Valley readers were Sheila Bali and Neva (Janie) Hodges. Jan Davies and Linda Todd were among the hundreds of listeners at this fifth annual event.

 

Fourteen Tri-Valley members published in Tapestries are (alpha order): Beth Aaland, Sheila Bali, Paula Chinick (Paula Christine), Jan Davies, Victoria Emmons, Neva J. Hodges, Alice R. Kight, Julaina Kleist, Violet Carr Moore, Reme Pick, Julie Royce, Marilyn Slade, Camille Defer Thompson, and Linda Todd.


December 2011 President’s Message from Violet Carr Moore

December stirs nostalgic reflections of yesterday and brings dreams for tomorrow. This season demands choices. Tall tree? Small tree? No tree? Mall shopping or online? Stay home or travel? If you’re a writer, you could be juggling these cold-weather options while you pen warmhearted Mother’s Day stories. Perhaps you’re curled by a glowing fireplace, editing a summer vacation experience for a travel magazine. Wherever you are-first draft, critiquing, editing, or publishing-it’s time to celebrate the writer in you.