First Lines, Last Days by Lani Longshore

Lani Longshore
Lani Longshore

One of my critique groups held a story challenge in 2011. We drew slips of paper with the names of an object and a place, and had to create a short story around them. This year one of the suggestions for the challenge is to start with the same first line.

As I scan my writing area, covered with scraps of paper like a forest floor littered with leaves, I wonder if I could use a first line challenge as a way of tidying up before the new year. Perhaps I could tell myself a tale of tragedy: “She took the remains of an old to-do list and noted the items left undone.” Each new scrap of paper would become another plot point in the story. If I were clever, I would turn on a tape recorder as I cleaned and by the end of an hour would have a neater desk and the beginnings of another short story.

Perhaps I could plan a picture book around the artfully created piles: “The soul of design is found in its instability.” I recently saw a book of grocery lists – just random grocery lists. The author had acquired hundreds of lists, photographed them, and published a book. That I almost bought, and someone else surely will.

2 thoughts on “First Lines, Last Days by Lani Longshore”

  1. Your blog made me smile. I could see your creative juices flowing in that cluttered enviroment. I think if you neatenized it, your muse would be distraught!

  2. You may be right – she certainly does everything she can to mess it up again when I’ve tried to clean the space!

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